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Hey! Listen! Download the picture if you want to see and read it properly!

Yes, I 'm tired of every n00b in the universe coming in with "OMG, my chara so pwnz0rz! Look at eet! LOOK AT EET!" and then when people say "It's so mary-sue" they get offended and want to shoot whoever said that, but the truth is, they are EXTREME sues, and their creator's are in denial. DENIAL!

But I'm still too nice. I want to flame the living crap outta every one of them, but instead, I'll just give a guide on how to NOT make a sue, how to fix a sue, what IS a sue, etc. Because I'm not the kind of person to work up the need to flame people because they suck at proper character creation. I have sues, some purposely (Tashina) and some that aren't so etremely bad (Lock Dragmire) but these people...these people make me want to cry in an emo corner, then some out and burn their faces off, throw them in the ocean with their hands and feet tied up, and throw xibbles at them to eat what's left. I'm talking about the characters, of course, not the creators. I just want to punch them a few times for being so freakn' annoying in chat.

Seriously.

All thse characters here are mine and mine alone, though I did just make them up for this tutorial.

I know the people aren't colored. I dun want to color them. You get the jist.
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On problem with your uber-Sue: she's too tall. Mary-Sue girls are almost always of an iconically statuesque-but-feminine height like 5'8"-5'10". 6'5" is too tall for her to fall prettily into the arms of her beloved Link/Dark Link/Fierce Deity/Sheik/Vaati, see? She'd make him look silly. On of the rules of Sues is that no matter how crazy godlike her powers are, she's still a charming, slender creature who's just the right height to rest her head on her hero/villain's shoulder.

(I guess she could still manage Ganondorf, though. Gods he's huge Oo; )

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Fox Lee: The Girl Your Mother Warned You About
Proud Antitheist - take your gods elsewhere.
I makes bases!
Fair comment, and yeah, at times I have trouble with the whole inventing character thing (so I don't really RP). I think you've handled this issue very maturely instead of ranting and raving with no logic.

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I don't need drugs, I can hallucinate all by myself!
lols, good guide sweets, hopefully the noobs will actually read it...

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"Free yourself from the chains of Society. Let not the words of others influence your own actions if it is not what you wish to happen." ~ By MadLucied
XD LOL! Oh yeah, forgot that one detail X3

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There is a fine line between genius and insane. I like to walk the fence.

Join the Zelda OC club, or the butterfly will open the horrible bag.

Someday, somewhere, there will be a reckoning. I will reckon you in the face.
thankee kindly :3

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There is a fine line between genius and insane. I like to walk the fence.

Join the Zelda OC club, or the butterfly will open the horrible bag.

Someday, somewhere, there will be a reckoning. I will reckon you in the face.
XD hopefully

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There is a fine line between genius and insane. I like to walk the fence.

Join the Zelda OC club, or the butterfly will open the horrible bag.

Someday, somewhere, there will be a reckoning. I will reckon you in the face.
Mwahahaha, I see a Sue that neds to be eatennnnn. >:3

Good job, Mel.... though I would have also added that an Anti-Sue also, if it does use magic, should focus on maybe ONE power, and it has to be explainable. Like an original character can't be all "Lololz, Hai guise I can pwnzorz u cuz I use fire and lightning and ice and..." etc. etc. And if they DO have unusual abilities they should be explained by something like the fact that Spheira can use shadow powers is due to Abyss or that Roku can weild fire is because of Pheonix, etc. though it doesn't HAVE to be an alter-ego that's teh source of the character's magic. XD


mehehe, Negaforce. -looks at Abyss' forehead and snickers-
A: Hmph. There is no such power. -arms crossed-

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Licensed to chill. :relax:

:star: Sketch Diary :star: | :flame: Boy Witch Takato :flame:
Oh goodness Mel! <3

::looks at Ziven::

Dahy: Hey, I just got all of my powers taken from me, alright?!

:sniccers: well, at least you haven't met Link or Zelda <3 (super sue)

This is lovely and will get right across to who you were talking about <3 (and out to me...? But I haven't been in the chat much </3 XD!)

Love for ya!

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Pants: *lying on the ground, ripped and torn like an emo boy's heart*
Merulu: In fact, I'm pretty sure they don't teach spelling in elementary schools anymore O.o'
Merulu: Teacher: Today, we're going to learn the word pwnz3rz
XD yay! She likes it! Well, lots of people like it XD AND YOU FAVED IT! Lot's of people did that, too XD XD You need to be in chat, girl! COME TONIGHT! I might be there, seeing as Nina can't now. It's a school week XD XD XD WOO!

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There is a fine line between genius and insane. I like to walk the fence.

Join the Zelda OC club, or the butterfly will open the horrible bag.

Someday, somewhere, there will be a reckoning. I will reckon you in the face.
Ah yes, the magic factor. I could so get into that, but I just have to make another tutorial thing, don't I? XD XD XD dunno if Imma do another TOO soon, that one took practically all night XD

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There is a fine line between genius and insane. I like to walk the fence.

Join the Zelda OC club, or the butterfly will open the horrible bag.

Someday, somewhere, there will be a reckoning. I will reckon you in the face.

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